great chapter! sorry that i havent been commenting. but here i am! lol! oh i hope you dont mean change in a bad way :( dae is safe and happier now. so a sequel from this point? if thats what you mean, im not so sure. it could stand to go a bit further. but if you had in mind to do a little more with this and bring it to a good stopping point. and from there, put out a sequel, i would be all for it. haha. *fingers crossed* that it isnt sad, what you have planned :O anyways great chapter. im so glad dae is in tayden's care. im wont say safe, because there is the possibility of tate or his father showing up. oh jesus i forgot about the father!!! ;O but yeah that. im happy he is away from tate and with tayden though. ;DD cant wait for more <3 ash
You don't have to make it a sequel. You could just call it part two of this story. Though having as a sequel does seem to make more sense. So long as you keep this story going your readers will be happy. Hope to be reading more soon! <3
-kayt