Hockey Sticks Banging on Ice - Comments

The first section was very neat.
Definitely a hockey players attitude(:

This was nice.
I think you could've used different words in some parts. For example, insteading of using hit, something like leveled or collided. Something to make it a little more interesting.

Other then that, it was a nice piece.

Great for us hockey fans ;)

ha, that's cool, the perspective of the player, the every different meanings of the sticks hitting the ice. loved it!

~moose~