Dark Eyed Dreamers - Comments

oh and thanks for writing it!

sad story....... off to read the sequel!

...i wonder why it says 2:54 am...its only almost 9 pm...

This is so epic!

This is why you are in our class lit class, Hayley!

what a dickface Jack is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow write the sequal and tell me i want to find out how this storey ends:)

WHAT KIND OF UNCLE CALL'S HIS NEICE AND SAYS 'HEY YOUR MUMS DEAD'
THAT'S JUST CRULE
PS luv it write more

luv the ending
you could try disney or a fairytale or a T.V show or even one of your characters names

PS i'd so laugh if Jasey Rae got pregnant
that would definately make me laugh
but you've probably headed in a different direction just
thought i'd say that before i forgot how fuuny it sounds
PPS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE OR ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

whoa, total drama!!!!
why won't Jasey Rae just admitt that she totally head over heels already,
because she obviously is!!!!!!!!!
add more please!!!!

thanks for the 'i'm cooler than everyone else' comment i appreciate it
and please write more it's really good and now Jack isn't so sad they make a good couple but what r ya goin' 2 do 'bout Zayden???

okay someone seriously needs to get Jayse rae and Jack together because i can't stand love sick pupy dog guys, it's kind sad.
PS love it write more!!!!

are you witing more cause i like it
and i mean really like it
i love enemy stories that turn out that their made for each other
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!