Make This Night Worth My Time - Comments

Ahh, I love this.

OMFG! I'm just glad that this chapter is FINALLY out :P
I liked it, it was interesting :]
Whoever goes next... Update soon?
This is definitely something I need to be reading x)
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MMMF.

hahaha, oh so love this,so so very much.

I have to say, Shawn is... a complete psychopath!
This story is really quite morbid, but that's what makes it so great!
Its definitley an interesting plot, I like it!
I also like Venenum's suggestion, that would be a very interesting twist (:

Shawn scares me, I don't like the evil guy o.o
I completely agree with Venenum!
That would be a good twist! >:3

You make me want to kill you, ahaha. Well, Shawn, anyways. /: Hmph.
I swear to GOD that if Danny or Kenneth dies, I'll kill a fool.
Y'know what would be a fan-fucking-tastic twist? Yeah, if SHAWN dies. >:D

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page claim, whores! :P

DAMN IT, I PRESSED ENTER!
now for the real comment....

OHMYGOSH!
shawn is an ass and all, but i love him! >.<
i dont know why...maybe because he just makes this story more awesome...

i think it's sad that they broke up! D:
but i'm excited to see what's next!
get to writing! XD

i love this. and i love you nicole! :P
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OHMYGOSH!

I want shawn and kenneth together and danny dead.... sorry... just trying to be controversial!

I stole this story off of my girlfriend's page... She was talking about how she loved the dark fictions, and was convinced I would be grossed out. I disagreed. Thanks for making me right again! ;)

yeah, kill shawn. i love kenneth and danny :D

Sweet mother fucker!
This is AMAZING!
Just absolutely, positively amazing.
I mean, not only is it incredibly well written, but the plot is just... WOW!
I honestly cannot wait for more!

Great. Just fucking great.

Damn, this is sick and pleasantly gruesome :)
I love the acidicness of shawn!!
Yet he's not ruthless to the bone, oh so very lovely <3
Amazing.
Update soon!! :D

Ha I mean Shawn!

This is amazing! I love it.
Kenneth and Danny are soo cute.
I want Sonny to die and leave them alone. But then this story wouldn't be so awesome.
Love it. (:

God this is amazing. I think Jesus just jizzed all over it and made it amazing.
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WOAH. I FIND MYSELF STRONGLY LIKING DANNNNNY.
He's just a cutie.
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It is really morbid, but if it has a happy ending and Kenneth and Danny stay alive, cause Im already super attached! also, kill Shawn. if you do the opposite, Ima cut a bitch! :) Wonderfully written.