I really liked it. It was short and sweet, and very well written. You had very good description, everything was clear. The length of it was great, and it was just fantastic. No errors.
I love short drabbles so I chose this one. And this was just the sweetest thing I’ve ever read. You put so much emotion into such a small amount of words. Everything just worked together so beautifully. I loved the soft blue and pink colors of the layout; I think they added to the sad and helpless feel of the story. I don’t really know how but such soft childlike colors appeared to be sadder to me. I could honestly see everything that you described here. I love that you took such a small piece of something that could have been so much longer and explained it so well and put it into such a small space that the emotion was so perfectly condensed. I just loved this a lot.