Left Alone - Comments

  • Ntin63

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    You know I say everything you write is amazing, but this is possibly the best snippet of writing I've ever read.
    March 21st, 2010 at 08:42am
  • rosewater tide.

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    I really liked it.
    It was short and sweet, and very well written.
    You had very good description, everything was clear.
    The length of it was great, and it was just fantastic.
    No errors.
    March 21st, 2010 at 04:16am
  • astronaut.

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    I love short drabbles so I chose this one. Cute
    And this was just the sweetest thing I’ve ever read. Cry You put so much emotion into such a small amount of words. Everything just worked together so beautifully. I loved the soft blue and pink colors of the layout; I think they added to the sad and helpless feel of the story. I don’t really know how but such soft childlike colors appeared to be sadder to me.
    I could honestly see everything that you described here. I love that you took such a small piece of something that could have been so much longer and explained it so well and put it into such a small space that the emotion was so perfectly condensed.
    I just loved this a lot.
    March 20th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • Beloved.

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    This is great. (:
    March 20th, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • morsmordre.

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    This was really nice.
    Those were some really lovely descriptions.
    Plus, I really enjoyed the emotion.
    Great work.
    I liked it. A lot.

    :D
    March 20th, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • Isildur'sHeir

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    wow...just. wow. =)
    March 20th, 2010 at 04:16pm