I'm Sorry - Comments

  • CarynPikachau

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    cute story ^_^
    July 14th, 2010 at 05:34pm
  • loverfayce.

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    One shot for one shot.
    I guess it was a two-shot. Oh well. tehe

    I wish this was longer. It works, being short, but I've never liked summing up relationships in just a break-up scene. That part of it seems a little lacking.
    The rest, however, is great. (: You fit a lot of emotions into a tiny space. I love the regret Alex was feeling.

    Overall, very very nice. I liked it.
    March 21st, 2010 at 03:43am
  • spector

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    I need smileys on this part. The Cheese one, specifically.

    This was really, really, really good. Like, incredible. I loved Jack and Alex as characters. <3

    The ending was cute though. And I was really happy for them. You fitted loads into just a few words.

    You missed a word in the disclaimer btw.
    March 21st, 2010 at 12:36am