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This is awesome!

First off your banner equals gorgeous, it definitely makes me want to read the story. I like summary, it’s informative and I really enjoy excerpts. One thing I’m not really a fan of is how the chapter title is a single I; it’s a little hard to click on and just a little bit bland. Oh, I like her name: Percy, I’ve never seen it used as a girls name but I like it. I really like how the first chapter is written; the anonymous person trying to explain Percy’s unique state of mind is really interesting and is making me curious. It all seems to make sense to me. I’m excited to read more!

Ohh. This looks really awesome.
You should write it! :)

Do it! Do it! :)