Going Somewhere - Comments

oh man, the first line just wowed me haha!
you're a really talented writer :)

ATTENTION AUTHOR:
I. Want. More.
This is very well written and I admire your style along with the idea.
I'm interested in seeing how this will go.
Please update :D
~Bree

Whoa. This story is really great so far. You write absolutely outstanding descriptions... I'm jealous. Ha-ha. Keep it up!

i loved the update(=.
and i know what you mean about those finals and what not. uhh, my school cant even decide on a single exemption policy. its so stressful.
anyways, keep the updates coming(=.

-Sarah

Love it. I totally know that feeling too, going somewhere. You have great talent and I feel honored that you commented my story first when honestly I've been looking for someone with your amazing style of writing on mibba for a while

peace out Eternal
can't wait for an update :)

Lovely first chapter!
I admire your writing skills; you articulate words and details well, and your grammar is excellent.
I'm interested to see how the plot unfolds. :]

wow. the way you right and the words you put in your story that make it all come together...its good(=. and your only on the first chapter!