It's Hard to See in Colour When You're Miserable - Comments

Fucking Phil! What's his problem?!
RORY DOES NOT EQUAL LIFE, PHILIP. YOU HAS A DAUGHTER.
But then he pays attention to her, so it's nice. :D
In my mind, I always imagine that they go off after this and get ice cream and their relationship blooms into something wonderful and they're just best pals. That's really how I imagine it; it's a wonderful way to think of it.
Yay! Did you win this contest? You should have. I was on the verge of tears when I read it. And the best part about this is that it seems like a Phil thing to do. I could actually see him neglecting one of his kids on complete accident, you know? Because he's Phil, and he's not perfect and he'll admit it, and he'll take his man pill when he knows he screwed up. And all that jolly old shit.
Plus, Phil's just great. :D

I STILL refuse to believe that Rick would ever disfigure a baby, though...just...no.

HAHA. Double post. Whoops.

Oh, how come I haven't read this before? I love it! :D It's really cute, darling! In a kind of depressing, not-so-cute-at-all way, but cute nonetheless! :]

Oh, how come I haven't read this before? I love it! :D It's really cute, darling! In a kind of depressing, not-so-cute-at-all way, but cute nonetheless! :]

Wow, that was really good.

You could literally feel the emotions she did throughout it. When she longed to be loved, when she was trying to get his opinion, when she was trashing her room. It was all very good.

Originality wise, it was really good, as well. This is the first one I've read that isn't like some bad relationship type.
It was refreshing to see that not everything revolves around horrible boyfriends, and girls that need anger management classes.

On the other hand, there were a few spelling mistakes popping up from time to time. They were pretty minor, but you could consider running it through a spell check.

Other than that, it was great, and I enjoyed it :D
Thank you for entering, and good luck.