Forced Affection - Comments

ohemgee!!! Please, another chapter!! I NEEEEED another chapter! that was so dramtic and then 'poof' it was over!!!! Noooooooo! >.< PLease, update!! >.< ohemgee, imma die

Please tell me leo was acting and won't kill her it would make me :(

anyway nice update!!!!

MORE!!!

Well let me know what your idea is?! I really hope you enjoyed it!!

AHHHH more. I want to know what happens next.. I have an idea but I'm not sure

I'm sorry you feel that way. I can handle criticism and I love that you love my story and really want to tell me your opinion-believe me I very much appreciate it. But not when you talk to me like I'm a student and you are a teacher marking me. By saying thinks like it would 'wise to recheck' it and I have improved in writing really makes me question my ability to write. I'm not sure how much you understand that comment hurt. Please try to understand I wasn't lashing out I was defending myself against the comment you left-it made me feel inadequate and question everything I have posted. I went back through all of my chapters and I was confused because I read them many times before posting them and I try to check all that and well I couldn't find them.
Don't critise on my writing ability, try and suggest things about the story line or something-because I know that my writing etiquette is much better than other people stories on here.
I hope you can see where I am coming from and understand what I am trying to say.

well, i've just spent my day reading your story and then i came and read your comment to me.I just wanted to give out some constructive criticism it wasn't necessary for you to go and lash out at me.
So thanks for that, made my day.

Thanks for your comment. I'm unsure if you are picking on it or not. So you don't like the characters? I'm sorry I'm a bit confused.
On that note though you are very right, Hallie does need to change it is on the way because she is facing everything now. Leo will ultimately accept her (hopefully) just wait there is big news coming there and as for the sexual tension it is most definitely there! I''m still not sure how I'm going to go about that one either :)
Still thank you for your opinion I very much appreciate it.

i uh just read everything you wrote up to and i have come to the conclusion that you like your characters to be very annoying. I seriously hope you make it work out for the two lovers but could you please and try not to make them less whiny. Hailey needs to change, Leo needs to accept and ultimately they need to do it because seriously this sexual tension you've created needs to break.

Good Luck

Thank you very much for that animeQT63 I really appreciate it. I'm glad you love this story so much! I pride myself on trying to keep it original :)

keep.it.real. I didn't have time to recheck this chapter because i just wanted to get it out there for everyone to read. But if you have issues with it, I would prefer you didn't criticise it and just stopped reading. I would also like to say that it only appears that I have became a better writer and it is now more in depth because I wanted it to be like that-now you get to understand the characters better. In the beginning whenever it was in Leo's P.O.V it was much more brief because he was denying his feelings, now it has became more in depth because he has accepted them. I would also like to point out that at times the wording is deliberately not suppose to make sense as it is a sign of ambiguity and it shows the characters confusion and indecisiveness.

Considering it's 11:30 and I have my first day of school tomorrow. Also the fact that I have been reading this story all day and just finished I have to say that this story is SOOOOO AWESOME!!! It is just so original and I LOVE IT!!!! :D

i absolutellllllly love it. please don't stop, btw, before you publish it, it woud be wise to recheck it cause sometimes it doesn't make sense, but apart from that your writing has improved the deeper i get stuck into this. I reckon if you edited it thoroughl you'd have publishing material right in front of you
<3
keep up the good work.

Thank you guys for all the support :) I really appreciate it!! Stay tuned the next chapter will hopefully be out soon!

And dont worry about the family problems. I haz them all the time =] Ill still be a loyal reader! <3

OMG! I loce this chapter the most. So much action! And pooooe leo! >.< zOmg.. I feel so bad for him. Id die of heart breack if somethin like that happened to me!

ah your killing me I want to know what happens next.. really good update soon

It's okay to not update if your having family trouble, I'll always be here!!!

I luv this story!!!

update when you can :)

oh almost forgot why do i have the feeling Skye's involved???

is she mentally retarded SHE CAN'T DO THIS!!!!!!!

NO MATTER HOW HARD SHE TRIES SHE WILL NEVER BRING HER BROTHER OR HER UNCLE FOR THAT MATTER BACK NO MATTER WHO SHE KILLS!!!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please?

No,no. I can't believe what shes choosing. She should have stayed and waited for Leo and everything uh she's gonna get herself killed or Leo killed or something. I can't wait for more loving it.

Im still lovin this story :)