Anata No Tame No Kinochi - Comments

lol, i liked it. Even if it was long and I was wondering if Kai was ever going to get on with it, but that's what made the story what it was ;) You did an impressive job on it.

This was very good. I love the ending...It make me laugh...but omg...this thing can make you have certain dreams

I feel rather... naughty, but this is a big guilty pleasure of mine.

That was so unf even Ruki couldn't believe it.

All of that was amazing, and the end...wow, Kai, are you really going to leave him like that?

One part that really stood out to me was the following:

“Don’t make me get out the strap,” the drummer whispers, and Aoi groans, understanding this to be a command to quit arching up into the drummer,

It made me giggle among other things.

Very, very well done, Taka.

Oh my God.
Okay, so I'm not going to choose every single favorite part of mine since the entire chapter happened to be my favorite part, so OH MY GOD, TAKA.
SO. HOT. UNF.

Oh and this?

“Comfy?” He chuckles, and the guitarist shifts as much as his restraints will allow. “Good. Because I think I’ll keep you like this for the rest of the night.” He smiles cruelly, and the guitarist peers up at him, and it makes a rush of excitement pass through him as he feels exactly how much control he has over his love. The power makes him feel confident, and he gives a final teasing kiss to the edges of the guitarist’s gagged mouth before he slips away. “Besides,” he says, and his voice is a dull slap to Aoi’s once again churning arousal, “men like you need should be taught to just keep quiet.”

HOLY SHIT OKAY SO KAI IS A FUCKING BAMF.
AND HOT.
AND OH MY GOD. THIS IS WHAT YOU'VE REDUCED ME TO.

...I love it, bb. :DDD
Like. A lot. As much as I've been saying since you started writing this.
Or more. I can't tell. It's amazing. Yes.

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