Because Everything Always Goes Awry. - Comments

i read it!
i really love how you add all the little details, and how you show the change.
he's aware, but can't control it once the medicine's gone.
GOOOOD.

Okay, so amazing. =] I didn't find any mistakes in your writing. I loved your layout, and you could easily read the words. The tittle was very professional like, and well described the story. Your style was perfecto, you didn't keep using the same words and such. It was also written very maturely, like it didn't sound like a kid wrote it. You did good showing what the disease is and obviously what it can do. I really liked it. Poor Daisy. I will get back to you with the results, they will also be on the thread.