Huntress - Comments

I'm so bummed that you didn't finish this story. :/ I really liked it. I hope you keep writing; your stories are so engaging. :)

This is a very engaging story, and SUPER original.

By the way, was the blue pot and the box supposed to be like Pandora's box?

Hey, thanks :) it's fixed now. Sometimes it's the little details that trip you up!

in the beginning of the chapter you mentioned how there was no food in the house. but then in the end you mentioned out she had gone shopping the day before.... you should probably fix that.

Just read the new chapter (yes, I figured out there was a new chapter 4 days late :P), and I loved it. Please keep writing!

I love it:):):):) update soon:)

Poor Tris. I've really begun to like him and now Diana's thinking of getting rid of him. I mean, he just proposed an absolutely romantic holiday together! I was doubting their relationship at first, I will admit. Its not like she can just introduce him to the Masquerade and expect him to accept it. But he really seems to care for her. I can't imagine that would be a very smooth break up, especially because Di has no real excuse. Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see what goes down. (:

So I found your story in someone's favorites on Quizilla. I can't be bother to remember who it might have been, and it doesn't matter all that much. I've been meaning to read it for a while now, but I've always had other stories I was already into that had been updated. Today, there was nothing new, so I think to myself, "Why not?" Then I find myself entangled in this amazing story full of just the right amount of drama and mystery and suspence and romance and anything that makes a story worth reading. I was highly upset it hit chapter sixteen and learn that the story hadn't been updated in over a year. I searched your profile and much to my delight found you on Mibba. I most certainly cannot wait for an update. :)

Wow. I loved this story so much. :) I can't wait for the update. My favorite character is probably Alec!

I love this story!! I'm so excited about the update!! I was absolutely ecstatic when I found out that you updated!! I hope that you continue on with the story because it is AMAZING!! :)

YEAH, I love this story!!!!!!It's really cool! Go on!!!
only one thing: chapter 15 and 16 are the same...XD

Wow this story is fantastic. Your wording and imagery is really nicely done.

It's kinda cool, too, to see the differences in Austraila and America.

I love this entire story. There is nothing bad about it.

I love this story and I'm glad that finally FINALLY I've found a story a really like that's not only not a romance or fan-fic, but it's also a fantasy. Yay! Happy me :)

Interesting story even though I've only read the summary! *subscribes*

Me loveess, write more!
And Happy Birthday :)

I love this, it so fun to read.

And Happy Birthday!

Still fantastic. I read this on quizilla, I can't wait until she starts training to fight again! Muhahaha.

Awesome update!

Just read the first few chapters, but it's fantastic!

I love this :]