I am not happy with this! I mean it was fantabulously wonderful, but I wish there was more to read!(: Um, Oh! You had the same chapter twice... Well, I loved it... I'm sorry but I'm too tired to leave some insane comments about me dying with out more, or how my love for this story burns with the something of a thousand somethingd, but whatever... (: Peace Out!(:
I've been team the whole time! Ben makes me mad... He reminds me of my best friend Andy. I used to be in very serious like with him, but then I got over him when he never made a move, then he said he liked me I was like whatever. And now whenever he sees me he acts like Ben does!!! Anyway, I really really liked this!(: More story would be greatly appreciated!(: Peace Out!(:
Oh My God!!!! I loved it!! The chapter was great I'm glad they got together like that I bet they must have looked so cute!! jeje I'm wondering what's happening next : ] Please update soon!!
I like how their personalities flip flopped but I think there's gonna have to be an excellant reason why && an explanation or apology from Jace!! I like him :)
I am still loving Ben. But Jace is cool too. :) In the 22nd chapter, a lot of I's were not capitalized like they should be. I just wanted to point that out. But, I loved chapter 22! It was amazing!
This story is really amazing! I started reading this story today, and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the latest chapter. Every chapter ends with me wanting more.
I adore Ben. He brings complications into Jackie's life.
“May I ask who this Jace fellow is,” Benjamin countered, doing this heartbreaking growly thing with his voice. This was not good!
“Touché’.”
This would probably have to be my favorite lines in the whole story so far. It was really funny!
There are a few spelling mistakes randomly throughout the story, so you might want to spell check the chapters, and fix them. Other than that, this story is amazing! I can't wait to read more!