Under The Light Of The Moon - Comments

  • rathlora

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    i really like this story, are you going to continue?
    September 25th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • rathlora

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    u got me all excited, but it was the same chapter again... >,<
    June 20th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • GYpsy1196

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    I am not happy with this! I mean it was fantabulously wonderful, but I wish there was more to read!(: Um, Oh! You had the same chapter twice... Well, I loved it... I'm sorry but I'm too tired to leave some insane comments about me dying with out more, or how my love for this story burns with the something of a thousand somethingd, but whatever... (: Peace Out!(:
    June 19th, 2010 at 09:51pm
  • GYpsy1196

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    I've been team the whole time! Ben makes me mad... He reminds me of my best friend Andy. I used to be in very serious like with him, but then I got over him when he never made a move, then he said he liked me I was like whatever. And now whenever he sees me he acts like Ben does!!! Anyway, I really really liked this!(: More story would be greatly appreciated!(: Peace Out!(:
    June 13th, 2010 at 10:44pm
  • aubs

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    I agree with morganvillevamps7. I am rooting for Jace now. Benjamin is starting to get on my nerves. But great update!
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:13am
  • morganvillevamps7

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    Ok I think I'm going for team Jace now, Ben is just so Ugh!!!
    June 7th, 2010 at 01:23am
  • Andreussita1990!

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    no no no no!!!!!!
    don't do it
    he's a freggin assss!!!!(sorry no offense)

    xS
    June 4th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • saraNeon

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    team jace!! (:
    May 20th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • rathlora

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    awww, i LUVED the old banner pic, where was it from?
    May 17th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • Andreussita1990!

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    Oh My God!!!!
    I loved it!!
    The chapter was great
    I'm glad they got together like that I bet they must have looked so cute!! jeje
    I'm wondering what's happening next
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    Please update soon!!
    May 17th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • morganvillevamps7

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    I love this story it just keeps getting better and better. Ben got what was coming to him!!!=D

    Please update soon!!!
    May 17th, 2010 at 05:30am
  • saraNeon

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    I like how their personalities flip flopped but I think there's gonna have to be an excellant reason why && an explanation or apology from Jace!! I like him :)
    May 17th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • rathlora

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    i still don't like Ben!
    May 17th, 2010 at 01:46am
  • Andreussita1990!

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    Ugh I'm sorry but i can't stop hating ben
    i bet he's the one behind the crimson trade
    along with that regina

    I really want somey=thing lovey dovey to happen between jace an jack not between jack and ben
    anyway the chapter was still great
    May 16th, 2010 at 09:13pm
  • aubs

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    I am still loving Ben. But Jace is cool too. :)
    In the 22nd chapter, a lot of I's were not capitalized like they should be. I just wanted to point that out.
    But, I loved chapter 22! It was amazing!
    May 16th, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • ladydee

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    it's realy good keep updating!
    May 16th, 2010 at 05:03pm
  • morganvillevamps7

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    OMG!!! I just love this story!!! And Jace or Ben it's so hard to choose! Update soon. Please!!!!!!!

    *subscribes*
    May 16th, 2010 at 08:42am
  • catgirl1321

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    I love it, i just really hope ben wins, i cant help but side with the more human being, not the dog *said with distaste.*
    May 16th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • aubs

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    This story is really amazing! I started reading this story today, and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the latest chapter. Every chapter ends with me wanting more.

    I adore Ben. He brings complications into Jackie's life.

    “May I ask who this Jace fellow is,” Benjamin countered, doing this heartbreaking growly thing with his voice. This was not good!

    “Touché’.”


    This would probably have to be my favorite lines in the whole story so far. It was really funny!

    There are a few spelling mistakes randomly throughout the story, so you might want to spell check the chapters, and fix them. Other than that, this story is amazing! I can't wait to read more!
    May 16th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    May 11th, 2010 at 03:03am