Love is Forever, not a Day - Comments

This was really good
It was sad, I had a feeling something sad was going to happen
At some point I knew what was going to happen, but it still got me.
The only bad thing is, that the language isn't 1940's, ya know.
I was thinking about that throughout the story, but as well, I was imagining it with a kid telling the story, using the words the kid felt like.

aww :(
Sad times lovely.
Nicely written, but sad.
x

When I started reading it I had a feeling something sad would happen adn you didn't disappoint. I loved it, it was really sweet and in a way I cna sympathize with Caroline. Though I am not waiting for my true love or anything like that, I am waiting for someone. And I can understand why she wouldn't hate him, and why she would stay loyal. It was written beautifully and I quite liked it.

Yea I knew it wouldn't be quite right, my friend actually helped me fix it alot lol. But yea I probably should mention I really didn't base it on my grandma it was just a random story =x

I liked the story, and it's nice that you wrote it based on your Grandma. :]

I guess the only form of criticism I can give is that the language isn't quite 1940s, but that's okay. :]