Don't Touch Me - Comments

This story is amazing! x3 i was like, ohmahgawd, whenever the guy and that other guy.. ohhmygawdd.. I love your story and can't wait to read more of it c:

Ok here are my comments. How old is the little brother? I thought he was like 6 at first LOL! And You should have Tiger (or shark which ever one is the girl's classmate) find her journal. You should have them work on the project after school. Make them go on field trips like to a spider exibit or watch spiderman 1, 2or 3. Have them go to a cemetary where one of there family members died at. Those can be bonding experiences. And If Tiger has a cutting problem then the girl should help him out with that also. The guy can lose weight at a gym. the girl can stay at the gym with him some days. And That's all I'm working with. Oh Love the attitude at the end of chapter 3. Oh the breyson bro (I suck at names sorry) he should teach tiger how to be cool. and of course the girl and tiger shall fall in love. hope this comment inspired you

Ok here are my comments. How old is the little brother? I thought he was like 6 at first LOL! And You should have Tiger (or shark which ever one is the girl's classmate) find her journal. You should have them work on the project after school. Make them go on field trips like to a spider exibit or watch spiderman 1, 2or 3. Have them go to a cemetary where one of there family members died at. Those can be bonding experiences. And If Tiger has a cutting problem then the girl should help him out with that also. The guy can lose weight at a gym. the girl can stay at the gym with him some days. And That's all I'm working with. Oh Love the attitude at the end of chapter 3. Oh the breyson bro (I suck at names sorry) he should teach tiger how to be cool. and of course the girl and tiger shall fall in love. hope this comment inspired you

I agree with Yoamma on the continued part, this story is very but very interesting & exciting so far X3 suscribed!!! <3

please continue. i hate unfinished stories!