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  • Isildur'sHeir

    Isildur'sHeir (100)

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    pretty good! i cant even write like that, and i'm in 8th grade.
    haha. =)
    i really loved this story.
    March 31st, 2010 at 02:15pm
  • mirasin

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    Considering how young you were when you wrote this, it's really good. In the beginning, it's a bit monotonous, but it adds to Peyton's kinda detatched feelings, so it suits the story.
    March 29th, 2010 at 07:50pm
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