Revenge Is Sweet. - Comments

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The summary is short & simple & I like/prefer it that way, though, there is an unnecessary comma in the middle of a sentence. Quick proofread may fix that.

I also think that the authors note in the summary copyrighting your work is a bit unnecessary, but everyone's different with their possessiveness & I understand.

Let me just say, you have a wonderful way of writing. I really admired the content of the piece in which you've submitted for the contest & I really hope you do as wonderful as I think you have. The only thing I thought a bit absurd of the story was Claudia & Nathan (after being caught of course) taking said cupcakes that were messed around with by Luna. I thought at that point in time, it was a bit too unrealistic but overall, the piece was really good & I liked it a lot

Not bad, not bad.

I see this concept a lot, but I see the story for its uniqueness. As such, it was pretty damn good! Seriously, the chemical (I know what it is; I just don't want to spoil it for those who haven't had their turns yet) twist was pretty awesome. Luna is a very, very, bad, bad girl!

I like it.
I think some parts could be written better, and the summary could be more compelling, but overall it was really good. I like the characters, and plotline. You did a good job making it original. Well done!

This story has a very interesting concept. It's one that's used often, but you took it and put a twist on it. I think that made the story better. It was a bit choppy in parts, but overall well written.

Wow my lesson learned!

Me likey! :D Makes me wish i had payed more attention in chemistry. lol. But it's pretty effing good! The title and picture were perfect fits. You did a good job

So. I pretty much 'effing LOVED this! :D
I think you used the picture very well.
The way it was written was amazing, I really felt like I was in Luna's situation.
All in all I really enjoyed it.
Great Job. ::claps: