Sleepwalking Past Hope - Comments

So, this is by far the BEST vampire Ville story I've ever read, especially since the other members of HIM are involved, not just Ville. But, you, my dear, are an exquisite writer! Marvelous really! I adore your style and such. But, this story, needs an update ASAP! :D<3

~Robbiexo

Have just started reading this....cant wait to read more!

Thank you for the update, a very merry Xmas to you also!

Really nice chapter, and a really nice way to start the [hungover] day of a certain poor girl who's still got to go to school.... XD
And an early Merry Christmas to you too :]

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-Katie

interesting to see the interactions now. lovely :)

I would personally of thought that they would maybe feel a wee bit more regret for changing her? Anyway, it was good, and I liked the way thata you showed her mixed emotions x

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-Katie

I liked this chapter a bit more than the previous couple, to nick a phrase, it flowed better. The whole 'let them talk' thing is always a winner <3

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-Katie

hello, sorry i hadn't commented. but i've been a little unsure of the development in the story. the situation (in the story) was bound to happen, yes, and is of immense importance in the plot overall, i imagine, but i had difficulty connecting to it as a reader. with the previous chapters i felt more emotionally connected to the characters, but more recently the chapters read almost as an out of body experience for me, if that makes sense. it's the sort of situation where i see what's going on, but i don't seem to have any understanding of it. i understand that ville's complete blood lust blinds him into acting as he does and that he regrets his actions after, that linde is astonished at ville, and olivia is scared of him... and so forth, but there's just something missing that makes it so i feel like i'm not seeing the entire picture. anyways, i usually don't like leaving comments like this, because i feel like i'm being mean, but here it is.

That last line was genius. <3

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-Katie

this is awesome :D

...aaaaaaand it gets better :D

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-Katie

and the suspense builds

great update :D

ahhh! god, you know i love love love love this! so glad you updated! sorry i've taken so long to comment.

I'm glad this is a ville vampire story I haven't read a real good vampire ville story in a long time

ohhh i liked this chapter. more of the budding romance, it was nice. the bit with the poem added depth to the characters and scene, i thought. and it wasn't exasperatingly long either, need i remind you again that i liked it? :)

thank you for another lovey chapter ")

your story is spicy

I loved this chapter, with the way you used the poem.
Is the "I'm on fire" a song or a poem or is that original?
It sounds really interesting and I liked the way you used that in the chapter.

YEEEEES! An update, how we have waited :)
Love it and can't wait to read more.
He's a very interesting carachter here, thay all are!