Jeeeez! I want a happily ever after already!!!! HEY PAUL! WHAT ARE YA GOING TO DO ABOUT IT!!!! 'CAUSE YOU BETTER GET ON IT!!! But really, great update :)
I really love this story :) It was a sad chapter...And I really want to know how Paul is gonna prove it to Lynn. Could you possibly update really super duper quick? :)
I love it!! And i love the style you've wrote it in. Usually i don't like stories with mutiple points of view but yours is amazing and i'm converted to liking them! I love the 'stop' 'play' parts too, they make it really unique. xx
Love it so damn much... It was very good.. Even if it was pretty sad it was very good.. Paul need to really make up for everything he did.. Seriously I like the part where he was slap.. That was pretty awesome.. =D