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  • octoberlover_1014

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    i love the note passing and i dont think he should.. he gets in trouble toooooo much!!! with school and girls!
    haha
    love the update! please add another chapter!
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:15am
  • octoberlover_1014

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    i love the note passing and i dont think he should.. he gets in trouble toooooo much!!! with school and girls!
    haha
    love the update! please add another chapter!
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • octoberlover_1014

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    i love the note passing and i dont think he should.. he gets in trouble toooooo much!!! with school and girls!
    haha
    love the update! please add another chapter!
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • CrazyCall

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    so i loved it SO much. it totally rocked. i was like Paul you don't do that to a girl but then the was he said sorry and said I love you was WONDERFUL!!! And I think that Paul should have a dad and a mom but maybe make one of them a step like the mom and then you could play into that's how Paul used to see women and that his dad try's to explain Paul to Lynn. I don't know just an idea. but i loved and please update soon!!! <3 :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • DemonAngelus16

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    Yay! You updated =D love it.
    And I say maybe one parent. But that's just me
    July 7th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • restlessheart

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    I love this so much!!
    Oh, Paul should just have a mom.
    July 7th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • brokenarrow

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    awww that was cute! and hell yeah i would read it
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:09pm
  • NothingIsPermanent

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    I love this story<3 and I love Avenged Sevenfold, so I'll definitly read :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 04:22pm
  • Little Duck

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    Awww :) The end was super cute!
    Paul's so protective! :) And you used the 'man-whore' thing! :P That made me crack up on the spot!
    Anyways, awesome chapter :P More soon?

    I think Paul should only have a mom; It's like that in most stories, and it works. I mean, if Paul had a dad, maybe he wouldn't be so man-whorish :)

    Oh, and bring on the A7X story! :) I'm a massive Avenged fan, so I would definitely read it. xD
    July 7th, 2010 at 01:49pm
  • xBuiltxForxSin

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    really sweet chapter and i'm guessing (guessing- key word xD) the teacher is gonna make her tutor paul? >.< tehe.
    Loved it and thanks for the update- also, i'm gonna send another banner (i get bored easily). xx
    July 7th, 2010 at 12:32pm
  • NihaoKrysta!

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    i love this chapter!!<3
    hahahaha and i agree with Delightful Syn, Paul should have a single mom that wants to smex up Billy Black. THAT WOULD MAKE ME LAUGH. xD
    update soon! :D
    July 7th, 2010 at 10:48am
  • RandaRue22

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    Still loving this story! I think Paul should have parents, nice parents tho. nobody likes mean parents...
    July 7th, 2010 at 08:27am
  • LiveFreeDieWell

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    I don't really understand how BAM he loves her and the imprint all of sudden when really he imprinted, was still an ass, and still slept with other girls and didn't give a crap about her. Why now and why BAM all of a sudden?
    Also, where are her feelings that don't have to do with sex? How can years of being made to feel like shit from Paul suddenly disappear with the WORD imprint, it seemed to be there before she found out but once he told her she was his imprint all those years disappeared.
    Sorry but these just really confuse me.
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:50am
  • popsicle?

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    i prefer the current simply left out, however if you feel you are able to write them in effectively then as sonniesaurus says," More power to you," :)
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:39am
  • sonniesaurus

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    That chapter was adorable. As for the question about Paul's parental folk, I'm not entirely sure how I feel on the subject. I mean, if you have a good idea for them, then more power to you.
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:20am
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I think Paul should have a single mom and that she should want to smex up Billy Black....lol
    And Post It
    I LOVERS AVENGED SEVENFOLD, unless it doesnt have Jimmy in it than I have a hard time reading it. I guess I'm not ready to let him go just yet...but I will so read it anyways XD
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:10am
  • She Said Poptarts

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    Oh, I loved the chapter. (: I gasped when Paul was all; "No, ma’am. I’m praying for forgiveness from the girl I love."
    Seriously. <3

    lol. And, yes I think Paul should have parents. Maybe just a mom, his dad like.. died or something.
    I don't know, or left them. But a nice and kind lovable mom. (:
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:07am
  • secrets-that-die

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    no i don't think so, he should have parents.
    loved the story!
    and heck yes i would read it :D
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:02am
  • come along pond

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    Great chapter :). Oh, and I would read it
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    It never seems like he does.
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    <3
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:38am