April 29th, 2010 at 07:51am
So Wrong, It's Right - Comments
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I'm addicted!! I want the next story asap...that would be greatApril 29th, 2010 at 06:58am
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yessss. so happy they didnt get married. cant wait til you start blurry. so wrong its right was so good.April 29th, 2010 at 06:44am
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Hell to the fuckin no!
I would not marry him!
She better not marry him!
He is fuckin raping for crying out loud!
thats just messed up in so many ways!
and um i hope this girl was just there to make mae jealous!
because alex doesnt need to be with anyone but mae!
ughhh!
update soon!April 28th, 2010 at 01:56pm -
Oh s**T!April 28th, 2010 at 06:14am
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i think she's going to follow through with the marriage and alex and her will still have an affair
or
Alex will come and talk to her and offer to come with him
or
she's just gonna run away from EVERYTHING!
btw fuck you alex.April 28th, 2010 at 05:50am -
So... you're making a sequel to the sequel? I got a little lost in the authors notes there.
What do I think will happen? Well, what I think will happen, and what I want to happen are to totally different things. So, I'll give you one. I WANT Stephen to get hit by a truck after Alex comes and fucks up his face with a two by four with a nail through it. But I seriously doubt that would happen because you've worked too hard on this story to end it like a really bad horror movie from the early 80's.April 28th, 2010 at 03:41am -
C'mon on hun, that's mean. Haha, anywhore - this is pretty amazing.
< 333.April 28th, 2010 at 12:53am -
Omfg :0 I knew stephen was a meaniee . Grr I hate him -.-April 27th, 2010 at 11:31pm
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"Jack wants you outside the bathroom, Ashton." Teresa said as Ashton patted my back and left.
geez, some friend Ashton is! She just left Mae in there while she was having a panic attack!!
and wtf is up with Stephen?!
he's yelling at her and then he rapes her?!
come on!
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!1April 27th, 2010 at 09:55pm
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Im so mad at you:-( I kid, I kid:-P
With all the twists and turns you've been throwing at us, i have know idea whats going to happen:-P
...i just really hope they don't get married!!
p.s did they get married in this chapter? Or did we not get there yet:-P I got kinda confused with the break i nthe scenes!April 27th, 2010 at 04:28pm -
Really I don't know what is going ton happen you always shock me!! Right when I think things are going to turn out a certain way, you go the other way. So who knows!!! But I do hope that she don't end up marring that douche stephen!!!!!!April 27th, 2010 at 02:50pm
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Sorry for the double post.
Hopefully that will make you update quicker. ;)
Hahaha.
<3April 27th, 2010 at 12:05pm -
Wow that was a very...Descriptive and abusing chapter. 0.0
I was hoping that Alex would just come barging in and save her from the evil Stephen!
Hahaha.
Love it!
Can't wait for more!
<3April 27th, 2010 at 12:04pm -
Wow that was a very...Descriptive and abusing chapter. 0.0
I was hoping that Alex would just come barging in and save her from the evil Stephen!
Hahaha.
Love it!
Can't wait for more!
<3April 27th, 2010 at 12:04pm -
GOD!! I hope she does NOt get pregnant of that jerk! She doesn't deserve that!!April 27th, 2010 at 10:41am
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Grrr!!! I HATE stephen, what an F*cking *beep*!!!! NO! Alex can NOT have another girl! Please, let Alex and Mae end up together, their perfect for each other!!April 27th, 2010 at 10:39am
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seriously, how many girls does alex go through like omgApril 27th, 2010 at 08:28am
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omggg :/
now i really hate stephen since he just did that to her.is she gonna get pregnant?
mae really needs alex back in her life and to be with him. he never tried to rape her.April 27th, 2010 at 06:50am
ex. "My eyes stopped when I seen (saw) the empty closet and (you might want to add something like "that" here to make the sentence complete) her dresser drawers were open and her bras and underwear were halfway gone."
I don't say this to be mean so I really hope you don't take it that way! I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism and help further your writing. I really like the story and can't wait for the sequel!