Ok. Now that my brain is fried, thanks to 25 chapters, and I'm half-asleep, I will comment. Well, To start off: I love this story. Plain&Simple. I love Alexander's character, and his grandmother ;D (Kinky Stuff) Hmm...I'm in love with Sarah :3 She so cute. PAT WILL FOREVER BE ADORABLE. Garrett, is still cute but not so much. And we need more Kennedy and Jared. Side pairing....? O: But, You have talent. I want this sequel with my cameo appearance. (; I loved every chapter, and you capture emotion well. And it wasn't boring, but you need to STFU when I'm reading because of my ADD. Once more: I love this story. It can go so many places. Oh, Jawno is an ass-hole. Who needs to apologize to Alex, and make it all better. We need to include the boy sex in the sequel, you tease. I NEED MY LOVIN. Kay? Kay. Alex seemed vaguely familiar, if ya catch my drift. [; I wonder if this is long enough...I think so. ANYWHO, I luff you justin beiber. and Update please, soon? Oh, and I can finally understand what the fuck your talking about! :D
I hope you know this made me cry D; (it's my own fault... listening to a sad song and it reminds me of my fucked up relationship!)
Seriously, I feel horrible for Alex (so bad it made me friggin' wince) because I know exactly (or almost exactly) how he feels. (ex)Boyfriends really SUCK sometimes. :\ The flashback killed me too. D:
Ideas.......... hm. All I can think of is a nightmare, like one of those nightmares that feel real? Alex should have one of those. About what? I don't know. Didn't get that far. XD
I'm pretty sure I'm blabbering now. This song is too sad and fits this chapter perfectly D; (Say Goodbye by Katharine McPhee. 3:)
Garrett's just jealous because he has nobody to give gentle lovings to while Sarah is off in Ohio. He doesn't want to let John and Alex be all gushy when he's bitter.
Stupid Garrett. Ruining their moment and all. So rude. (haha)
I cannot wait to read that new story. But, I might not be able to read it right away because my friend's staying with me for a while and a bunch of other stuff. (I'm blabbering, aren't I?) I'll just shut up now.
I think this actually made me feel a little less sick, because it made me happy to see that you updated :D So, update again and maybe I'll get better, haha <33