You're All Two Sides, and Struggling - Comments

See! Even his mother doesn't like Jenny. That's an obvious sign to dump her :P

Alex is obviously better :)

Great chapter :D

Yet again an amazing chapter ^^ I hate the girl but love John and Alex

Awesome, I'm liking John's attitude in a way.
But his new girlfriend is making me a bit upset.
Anyways; the chapter was yet again amazing, can't wait to see what happens :D

Great upate love the whole pulling the shirt down as far as it would go and John was all "I've seen it all before relax" lol it was awesome ^^

Is it bad that I like how John is screwing with his mind?
Even if it is, I still find it amusing XD

This story is freaking a m a z i n g. :)
Please update again soon <3 :D

Wow, chapter two was simply amazing. I loved it. <3
you're, like.. so descriptive. and the paragraphs are frickin' huge.
and i love the story line so far. <3
MOAR SOON?

I'm going to say this again, because it should be said: your writing style and descriptions are just wonderful. I love the way you've sorted out your characters. I'm pretty upset about John being with a new girl, especially when he was all up on Alex's face, y'know. And I love how you've made Pat out to be--overprotective over Pat and all. That's really sweet. This has so much potential to be a really great story. I can't wait for things to just start taking off. :)

This is pretty intresting, got my attention.
I'm subscribing and waiting for a new chapter soon :D

Okay you have once again baffled me i love this story and here is an odd idea but you could do a flashback of what life was like when they were together you know like a day in the past maybe give the audience a better idea....idk lol ^^

Not quite what i expected but i am digging it more please ^^

Intrigued. I would write a longer comment, but I don't know what to say. Your descriptions are wonderful and I like how colloquial it is and it has a 'voice.' That's always good to have when I'm reading something; almost like I can hear his thoughts and him saying it all aloud. I don't really read stories like this, but I'm pretty stoked about this. :)

really like this a lot.

Ooh!! I like it... A LOT!! update soon??

ACCCKK.
I love it so far.
It's amazing.
You're so descriptive, and the chapter's so long..
ACCKK. it's wonderful. ;D
*first subscriber*