Give Me a Kiss and I Will Surrender - Comments

can u make ur paragraphs a lil shorter?

OMG WTF!?!?!?
I see how it is... no telling me about the new story or anything... I am OFFENDED
BUT it was good so far. Your writing has developed pretty well since I last read something from yous guys.
My advice would be to re-read the chapters carefully before you post.
There was apart in chapter 2 (i think) where they were talking about maps. and you put new instead of Know. which would have made it make sense lol
But it ruled none-the-less

i probs shouldnt be writing this here but first comment and all. but i wanna say updates might take a while now :/ but ginge that was good, donna be hard to follow