10 Things - Comments

YAY! An update! I'm so happy! Steph was a bitch in this one! And don't get me started on Ethan. BUT since I was treated to a preview (I hope thats the direction you're still going), I'm totally excited for the next update. And holy crap, new guy has cancer too?!

Holy wow. Did NOT see that one coming. A new guy. This just got a lot more interesting...he he he. As always I am very anxious for the next update because you left me hanging. OK, so it wasn't a REAL cliffhanger but it felt like it! I mean, enter in new mysterious guy and end chapter? Oi! So, I guess since this wasn't a real cliffhanger I wont carry out my goldfish threat BUT it would still be nice if you updated like really soon. As for her parents...I don't know how I feel about them just yet. I am glad she accpets Wyatt as her dad. THAT freaked me out there for a good few lines. :S As usual, loved it and more soon!

OMFG!

Riley is such a b*tch in this one! But this is a great chapter!!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!!

This...is probably one of my favorite chapters you've written. This is exactly the drama I was talking about. It was long, but when I reached the end it felt like it was only a paragraph. I hate Riley in this one- but thats good. The way it was supposed to be played up. And Ethan for once wasn't just the sweet good boy. With a chapter like this you could almost pull of something like Iris giving up her fight (Riley said some harsh stuff) only for the other two to realize it and...yeah. But once again, just thowing stuff out there and I love whatever you come up with. The icing on the cake that made this chapter even greater was the cliffhanger. I hate authors that do nothing but cliffhangers at the end. It gets old. But this was random and unexpected and now I want to hunt you down and force feed you live goldfish until you write the next update. I'm seriously that impatient. Loved it and please, for the sake of my sanity, update soon!

OMFG!!!

She liiiiiiiiiives! Welcome back to the dark side! We've missed you! Loved the update! Nice and long too. I think it's drama time cuz right now it's at the predictable point where we (the readers) can see that Ethan's got a little thing going for Iris. So my suggestions to spice up this mix...
-Play up Ethan's bad boy side (he IS still a bad boy right?) ALOT cuz he's being waaaay too nice. Plus bad boys in a story are sexy and just cool.
-Throw in some (more) Riley/Ethan/Iris drama. Best friend + bad boy (who isn't all bad) + dying girl= one hell of a ride.
-Make this chemo treatment really rough on everyone...make it feel like dying would be better than this torture. That in combination with other drama should be crazy.
Those are my suggestions. Take em or leave em. Either way, you always come up with something good. Glad to have you back and write soon!

Someone else!!

RILEY AND ETHAN! can you say draaamaaa! good update. thank god for nice police officers.

Number 2 for sure. Number 10 is like the build of the story. :) Short but cute. Thanks for the update oh great author. Can't wait until you grace us with another chapter.

I'm gonna sing to you right now. "Did I ever tell you you're my heeeero?" Seriously, I'm writing this from my iPod in the most boring class ever. Thankfully I saw an update from you AND it was adorable. Loved this. Saved me from this dang class. Ethan is freaking awesome. Can't wait for more. Definitley not stupid.

I say chemo because it will make the story more interesting and if the womb was taken out it would make the story not have so much twist and turns which I like

Don't care if it's short. Still like it. WHY did you pick a hard question?! I can't pick. Chemo would probably prolong the story and add drama. But surgery would work too. Sorry, can't answer this question.

Just to clarify she is still dying right? ANYWHO- I've just had a night from hell at my job. First day and all. Just got off, have an early class tomorrow and I'm very cranky. I wasn't even gonna get on my computer but I did anyway and I'm glad. An update from you was worth it. Thanks for making my night less sucky. I wonder which option she'll choose? I mean, every woman dreams of having kids. But chemo is really freaking rough. So I'm curious. Write soon.

>.< Its a great story, I love the plot.. But its just so weird!! The grammar and the way everything is put together, it makes it sound like your three years old hun.. "/ Maybe try rewriting it?? I love the plot, I really do, but just the way the plot is TOLD. =\

It's OK, we forgive you. An update is an update. Gotta say, it's kinda weird that they went from being enemies to friends right away cuz we as readers didn't get to actually SEE them as enemies but that's alright. Looking forward to more as always.

You put in my cupcake one! Lol.

I like it

Ooooooooh jeeze. We're off and running. So lemme get this straight. Iris is good, Ethan is bad, together they make enemies, and Iris has cancer. I'll say this again. Oh jeeze. Now enemies are gonna fall in love and then good is gonna DIE. Seriously! Hating this story....but loving it at the same time. The first chapter was great and I love it I just hate this whole caner thing! But I shall stay strong and read. Now great author, please do this lowly reader the honor of writing and posting the next installment of this horrid yet beautiful journey. (Bahaha! Sorry, couldn't resist.) How old are Iris and Ethan?

This story has already been written quite a few times, so I'm interested to see if you can come up with something original to write about.

what I would want to do before I died would be to have someone to marry.