Cops and Robbers - Comments

  • Uri

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    Braden and what's-her-name (Sunny Side Up or whatever)and Dallas( well, I remembered it because it's a kinda cool name:D)and Jeremy and..and...oh, I just realized that I forgot the main character's name( one of the main characters:)) are cool kids:D
    I like the title of your story, Emmie:D. I used to play this game and( of course) I was the badass robber that would always get tied to a light post or something with improvised cuffs( which meant some kid would hold my hands with his own and/or tie me with a rope he'd just found behind the block). And (of course) I would be the lame excuse for a cop that would catch 0 out of 1/more kid/kids.
    Yeah...I said it! You will be famous soon(this is where my evil laugh starts off, but my throat is kinda sore, so...yeah...I'm gonna skip that part)
    Good fucking job:D
    April 24th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • voidoids

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    Just found this, and I do believe I am completely and utterly in love.
    November 26th, 2010 at 09:24am
  • animal soup

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    I just stumbled across this story,
    and I already love it dearly.
    Your voice in just incredible.
    The plot line and characters are so stunningly real.
    I love how realistic Braden's thought process is.
    He is so beautifully wounded and the narrative is fantastic.
    I love this so much. <3
    November 17th, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • helloxthere

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    I can't wait to read what happens when they see him on their car haha.
    August 18th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • lovely youth

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    OH MY GOD YOU UPDATED.
    :D
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:09pm
  • orlando weeks.

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    This story is great.
    Cannot wait for more.
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    i have just started reading this! :) i hope you update soon! :D
    June 19th, 2010 at 02:27pm
  • helloxthere

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    I really like this story, can't wait to read more. :)
    May 25th, 2010 at 09:46pm
  • Anarchy in Words

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    Braden's so damn adorable. And I really wish that Hope lightens up a little bit.
    April 30th, 2010 at 03:15am
  • Brittany Lives

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    Okay so....
    I'm really late on reading this, but I just read all eight chapters and I find this to be very intriguing.
    I'm thinking Jeremy is my favorite character even though he has no official point of view, and Braden is just... he's adorable to me. And Hope... she comes off as kind of bitchy, but I think she's just misunderstood and slightly pissed off at life.

    Either way you have great characters, and a well developed story thus far.

    That sounded oddly formal.
    April 30th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • lovely youth

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    REJECTED.

    Not really, but whatever. :)
    April 29th, 2010 at 08:40am
  • Anarchy in Words

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    I can't wait to see what happens. Just started reading this today, and I'm all excited.
    April 25th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • lovely youth

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    loved the ending to that. it made me laugh so loud.
    April 18th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • lestat de lioncourt

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    haha, that last one, the ending. hahaha. ;D
    April 18th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • HippieDays

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    Alright, this is fantastic. It's definetly one of those stories that you can't stop reading. Great job, guys. :)
    April 11th, 2010 at 09:28pm
  • lestat de lioncourt

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    mmmm, i'm excited.
    April 9th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • lestat de lioncourt

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    mmmm, i'm excited.
    April 9th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • DayOfTheBees

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    I love this, it's so realistic and the characters are so brutally honest. (:
    April 9th, 2010 at 07:19pm
  • lovely youth

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    I love Hope's POV.
    April 9th, 2010 at 06:31am
  • freeflyer.

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    Hey, just wanted to let you know I like this a lot(:
    April 9th, 2010 at 06:01am