Twins - Comments

thanks guys for the comments, ill start working on the next chapter

I love it, it has a totally different approach than any other stories I've read on here.

love it

i love this story =] keep writing!

I don't think you could copy Identical because Identical isn't about twins at all..
and I have just finished the book. It's right beside me right now!

thanks guys! but itll be on hole for abit till i can finish reading identical i dont wanna copy anything!

I like the way you end every POV with the same sentence lol it's like twin telepathy.Update?

haha okay thanks! ive never heard of that before! ill read it before i update again just so i dont make anything the same! thank you for telling me! i can also change things a little ya know? but anyways i hope you guys keep reading

I liked it but it really reminded me of a published story - "Identical" by Ellen Hopkins. It is a story about identical twins, one who is being raped by her father and another who has sex to get drugs to escape her world. I am not accusing you of copying, but I really wanted to warn you of the close similarities. Other than that, great story so far :)

i love it...can't wait for more!

woot woot this is amazing!!!

Yeah, I like this. It's got two people's points of views, but as third person view.
If that made sense....
I really liked this.

I loved your story. It's cool how you incorporated two different people with the same lie. And the layout was awesome as well, and plus you get bonus points for turning in your entry early. Good luck, hun.