In the Streets of Shame - Comments

OH jeeze.
I love it.

You are an amazing writer, from what I have seen.

that was kind of sad. but very well written you're a great writer

Okay, so I actually stayed up and risked a fatherly explosion to read this, because, I'll admit, you made me curious.

And although it was short, this chapter really held a lot of emotion, Mad!

Although I see your reflection in this crimson disaster, our blood is nothing alike. For yours was nothing but deep red wine, while mine is as pure as your will to live.

Oh Karma. Those lines, especially that last one, were so incredibly well-written, I was kind of jealous that I hadn't written them myself. I would love to be able to claim those lines as my own. But I'm so proud that they're yours.

Mad, you have no idea the pride I hold for you. You seem to put yourself and your writing down so often, but my opinion of you is incredibly high. You write so well; I know you know this, despite what you say. There's just a lot of raw emotion in this story, brief it may be, and I'm proud that you're continuing with it.

Keep writing, always keep writing.

Love,
Fink

Oh my karma, Mad.

I'm kind of...blown away. I mean, seriously, when I was about to read this, I wasn't expecting anything like this. I didn't know you were such an amazing writer! This story, this beginning, was just completely ethereal. You described it in such an amazing way, so beautifully, so amazingly tragic. Totally blew my mind.

A doctor would call it ‘Addiction.’
A shrink might call it ‘Masking.’
A preacher would diagnose it as ‘Sin.’
A protester would think it to be ‘Ignorance.’
You yourself would call it ‘Despair.’
Most would just say it was ‘Selfish.’

That part was my favorite. There's so much truth contained in one tiny chapter, and it just hits you all at once, you know? A huge blow to the system. It makes you think a whole damn lot.

Amazing job, Mad. If you don't continue with this, I'll seriously be surprised, and angry, because something like this deserves more explanation.

Damn, I'm just so surprised.

Love,
Fink

dang.
this is quite nice.
more soon?
<3

What an awesome writing style. It made me want to cry the way you described it. Effing beautifully written, keep it up.

That was so beautiful. The narrative was so tragic... I love it ^_^
*subscribes*

Really really good. I love the way it's narrated. Looking forward to more. :]

Woops, double post. Sorry.

Really really good. I love the way it's narrated. Looking forward to more. :]

YAY!!

Nice Job, Mad ! &#9829;

* subscribes *

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