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  • FakePlasticCarrie

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    Thanks for reading and commenting:D:D
    November 12th, 2007 at 09:10am
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    I cried... this is sooo sad... I cried... This is sooo well written... and so sad....
    November 12th, 2007 at 07:01am
  • FakePlasticCarrie

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    thank you :):D
    We'll see about the best thing you've ever seen written when so fragile we are is done:)
    November 12th, 2007 at 06:43am
  • TrevorRashid

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    Mass-death so should been the direction this story went like I told you earlier. Just think about it. That mother so wants to commit suicide right now, she lost both her children.

    I quite like this story. The best thing I've seen written by you.
    November 12th, 2007 at 06:41am