A Mask - Comments

This was simply amazing.
I loved it.

Hello. I'd like to say, thanks for joining my contest.

And that this story is very unique. It leaves me curious and speechess. I think it was very well written and you deserve a big round of applause. Yay!
Keep up the great work.

Oh and good luck. :)

I finally got around to read this!:D

This is great! Leaves me craving for more but it was ended perfectly, not too soon, not too late. It flowed really naturally, and I just want to hug Kitten and beg him to tell about his problems, to get it out. I immagine Andy's concerning eyes as the bartender, and I wish Kitten would just talk to anybody. Poor kid.
Beautifully written, as always!

Aww I loved this
I felt so much for Cat in this, and I just want to throw my arms around him and hug him You handled his emotions perfectly without going over the top and making it all dramatic etc. Like others have said, you left this very unanswered and in this peice, I like that. It wouldn't have been so gripping if you had made it clear why he wore the makeup etc, and it allows you to try and figure it out yourself. :)

I loved the line "He cries because it burns, but he craves the burn."

As usaul it's so so good Well done!

One Shot For One Shot

This was amazing.
I love how you told the story practically with his make up. It was really different and I really enjoyed it.
I don't know what to say now, it was seriously amazing.
You're incredibly talented.

I love the plot of this, the metaphor of the make-up is beautiful.
It really makes you wonder about his life, and why he is so dependant on the mask.
This was written beautifully, and I think you're a really talent writer to be able to pull this off.
Brilliant job!

I love Kitten in this. And I feel really sorry for him, in a way. He reminds me of myself, just on a different level.

Because of the way you've written it, there's questions left unanswered, and I love that. I want to know why he wears this mask, why he goes to bars like that.

It's only eight AM so I'm sorry for the shitty comment, but I love this, Kat. I really do.

this story.... one of your best :) you are really getting better from a story to story.
I dontknow. maybe i sound like a broken record already xD

the description parts were just so great. I loved that part where you used each eye shade for each place where he went. i dont know why but that part was very appealing to me

excellent job, this story :)