Shh It's a Secret - Comments

This is really good so far. Roger seems like an ass :| It gave me the creeps just reading about him. Oh, and you can't post links in the story like this one: ((Her dress but black: http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e199/Britneyk/tonyandelena.jpg )) It's against the rules and can get your story deleted. Also, there were a few punctuation errors, but those can be easily fixed if you use a Word document.
Anyways, great job!

Amazing! I absolutely adored it! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

So wow.
That totally had me hooked from the first section. In my opinion it definatly fitted with the paragraph and took a very romantic take on it, which i adored. The whole mystery behind the dance partner, kept me interested.

One criticism would be the length, it was a little on the long side so you could have easily broke it down into other chapters; but you know that =P so its pointless me saying it!! Oh and I'm not a fan of "*sexy bit* " so if you had broken it down that could have been the end of one chapter or something? I don't know.

But saying that, I adored the story from beginning to end. It was very different from most, and almost had this time change feel, like she worked in the modern world and danced in a very differen era! If that mkaes sense.

Anyway
Thank you for entering.
That was an amazing entry!
xxxxx

This was amazing!

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