Personally, this one had my favourite picture and this story happened to have the best layout of all the entries. I did like the story and I think you did a good job with how she felt out of place to where she was uncertain about a party and a boy whom she just met. Though I do wish you had went into depth with this a lot more. I think it could have been fantastic (don't get me wrong, I do think the story was good). Well done.
I did like the story and I think you did a good job with how she felt out of place to where she was uncertain about a party and a boy whom she just met.
Though I do wish you had went into depth with this a lot more.
I think it could have been fantastic (don't get me wrong, I do think the story was good).
Well done.
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