Shouldn't You Have, the 'Luck Of the Irish?' - Comments

^ That comment, right there, made me laugh. xD
Hilarious.

“Lindsay you just don’t understand. I used all my luck getting you.”

A huge aww-ing moment right there.

Oh Jonathan. The things I would do with that man.
This actually made me sad...because I want him...in my pants.

This was absolutely great
I love it when he says he used up all his luck to get her.
The entire 'bang' part gave me the impression that he was shot
I was relieved when I read that he wasn't :)

I'm in love with the Irish accent.

Cute :)
I actually love the irish accent!!!
x

I agree with Electric Goat. on the beginning. I didn't enjoy being given the straight facts of how they met.

There's no snow in March in Ithaca? There's always snow in March in Ithaca, even if it's melting.

Man he's getting hit left and right. It was cute. I like that he walks into the sign. That was awesome considering we do it, but we don't often write about doing it. We like romance to be picture perfect, but those little bits made it more realistic.

It was a nice little short. Good luck in the contest!

Aw, I loved how cute it was. And I LOVE that guy, so brownie points for that. I think it's cute that he claims all his luck was used on her.

I met my boyfriend, Jonathan, when I was a freshman at Cornell University and he was a sophomore. He came over from Ireland to go to college here. He has short soft brown hair and gorgeous eyes, his accent along with his looks, drove me crazy. Now I’m a junior and he is a senior, we’ve been together for three years.

I didn't really like how it begun. I think maybe instead of just stating it this way, you could talk about the moment they first met, or how he captured her attention the first time she saw him.

Something like...

He seemed almost unreal when I first saw him. He was so gorgeous, and when he opened his mouth and I heard that captivating Irish accent, I knew I wanted him to be mine...

Something along those lines.

Great one-shot! Thanks for entering!

When I read the bit about the "bang" and the jerking on the arm I thought he got shot and I'm like D: "what?! No!"
but it was all good. Phew (:

It was really sweet, especially the last line, loved it :D

This was cute. :)
Loved it dear!