Artemis and the Hunter - Comments

I really love how you describe the characters.
Awesome writing style.

I love the Greek Gods, by the way.
With the way you wrote this, I could easily understand Artemis's personality.
You described everything beautifully. This was a really good one-shot.

u r crazy!!!!!!!!!!!
u think my Artemis version of this is better!!!!!!
go get some sleep and re read it and then tell em your opinion.
your word use, grammar,plot outline, character personalities, and EVERYTHING was 10 times better then the crap i put together!!!!
i feel like i disgraced Artemis, compared to this!!!
and i like love her!!! hahaha
i hope u won this contest cause u deserve it.....i just hope the owner of the contest were in now doesn't read this and read mine at the same time while judging cause illl sooooooo lose!!!!

Wow, that was great and I'm not just saying that 'cause I love Artemis :)
I like it
I've read one an Artemis page an exact story, but the man was killed because he was gawking at her.
I like your writing style it's really good.

Okay so I love this story. The plot is cute and I love Greek gods. You could have maybe mentioned they were greek gods? Also to me this sentence doesn't make sense: The twins had always been closest to each other.

But overall amazingly great.

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[x] Link to My Profile
[x] Link to My Contest
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It's truly an amazing story.
I do enjoy your writing style.
The story was definitely a classic.
Good luck in the story.