Fake Plastic Trees. - Comments

THat was great!
What I didn't like: cussing. I hate it. But that may be besides the point
What I liked: everything else! I don't listen to their music or anything of the like, but as two best friends, that was a marvelous story. Most people here do everything about romance, but this? It had a meaningful, deep relationship that meant more than anything. It was so different, so original, and sweet. You had pretty good grammar and good structure, which is bonus points for everyone, because too many mistakes will distract people.
But in all, you turned this into a great story that people could probaly read over and over- and thats what makes a great story. Thanks for entering my prewrite and letting me read this!

This was so heartbreaking. But you wove it into something beautiful and smile-inducing at the end, not just with the small bit of humor you threw in with what would be Frank's usual attitude, but with the hope that seemed to be restored in Mikey.
It was absolutely beautiful.

That was so amazing! It was heartwrenching and beautiful, but it was amazing nonetheless. Hearing the things that went through Mikey's head and how they changed when he realized Frank loved him was amazing. I also really loved the end, how Frank was yelling for the nurse. It was cute.

Honey. It's beautiful.

Love Rachael xo