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  • AwkwardMonster

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    I just spend an hour reading this entire thing. Can I just say, you're amazing.

    Why don't you write a sequel for this? Just some side stories on their lives between getting married, and doing their new job. Getting to know her mom more and stuff.

    Just a thought.
    May 17th, 2011 at 01:24pm
  • miser

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    I have an obsession with To Kill A Mockingbird too.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 02:54am
  • Faded Hues of Glory

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    Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
    Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
    She admitted ittttttttttttttttt!
    :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
    ... one more chapter :(
    I very much so love this story, and sad I didn't discover it earlier! D: Better late than never, though.

    Also, thanks. I like the new name too ;D
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • Faded Hues of Glory

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    HOLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYY MOTHER OF GOD.

    :O

    I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. AT ALL. >> Well, I abosofreakinglutely love this and I hope you update soon. <3
    December 28th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • Faded Hues of Glory

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    Uh, Chapter 16; the butterfly image you use didn't come back. It's just the coding there.

    I'm gonna keep reading now. x3
    December 28th, 2010 at 08:28pm
  • Faded Hues of Glory

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    I really love this idea, and it has little to no mistakes. However, there are some places where the spacing is off, like in Chapter 7:
    "So anyway, I reread to kill a Mockingbird over the break." His smile seemed more sincere now and I let the thought that something wasn't quite right with Luke go.
    "How did you find it this time?"
    "Better than before."
    I beamed. "I was right, aren't it? It gets better with each time."
    "Sure. But I prefer Atticus over Jem."
    "Everyone likes Atticus."

    Make sure you space between the paragraphs. But I'm very curious to know what happens next. :]
    December 28th, 2010 at 07:51pm
  • TheGirlinTeal

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    Ahhh I always love reading a story til I get to the last chapter, waiting for an update. Well this story is defiently worth it, thank you for writing it. It's so hard to find a good story on here, one with punctuation, and proper grammar. Among other things a good author, I really enjoy it, and cannot wait for the next update.
    December 3rd, 2010 at 02:08am
  • miser

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    Interesting.
    December 2nd, 2010 at 08:42am
  • kiwi12

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    Aww thanks for the mention! I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was AWESOME! ...as were the last ones... :D
    November 5th, 2010 at 02:32am
  • kiwi12

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    Stupid exams! This is my new favorite mibba story!
    October 19th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • kiwi12

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    This is a really interesting story, worthy of my subscription!
    I like it a lot!!!
    October 18th, 2010 at 05:14pm
  • end.of.forever

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    Nobody comments anymore :(

    *Sigh*
    September 6th, 2010 at 11:57am
  • hola

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    a very good chapter as always
    June 11th, 2010 at 09:53pm
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    This chapter was, once again, amazing.
    I don't know how to describe it, so I'll just say it in a few words:
    I love this story. It's fun to read it - because I get totally sucked in this new world.
    Your descriptions are sometimes vivid, but they still explain or make you realize many things.
    Let's just say that all in all, I've fallen for this story - completely.
    April 25th, 2010 at 03:09pm
  • Perfect4Imperfection

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    You really have great writing skills.
    This story is different, new, not like the others - and that's what I like.
    I love it when people create their own little worlds for others to read, not just some copy.
    That's why I already love this story.
    Moreover, it's really interesting. I wanna find out more about...everything.
    I hope you'll continue this. :)
    April 10th, 2010 at 11:53am
  • Up up away

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    It's going great. Your story, I mean.

    I'm curious about the grade scale.
    April 3rd, 2010 at 12:03am
  • Up up away

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    One: Love the layout. Did you make the top banner by yourself? It's neat.

    Two: Great story! Definitely worth a subscription.

    Three: What's a beta reader?
    April 1st, 2010 at 02:05pm