....why the hell would you do that to us??? I cried like crazy for Jimmy (literally, I didn't, but I felt the emotion which is close enough) I am being optimistic from now on ^_^
For some reason, I think that Michelle became a hostage to Sean in those three weeks. She tried to kill herself rather than take down BC from the inside.
Brian was naive. His emotions were a little to flat for my taste. I liked the moments with Zack's fingers on Eliza's hip. Is there some Eliza-Matt drama heating up?
Just thought of something, Brian was so quick to leave BC. Maybe he's the traitor and Michelle is going to be his helper!
Wait I'm confused. It said the leak was the girl who was girlfriend of the fourth oldest one. Then that would be eliza. Cuz zacky is fourth oldest. But then at the end it said where's michelle. I'm confused. Dx
I liked the way Matt showed just how strong he was. It's wrong to hit girls but it was somewhat needed.
I wish I had a clues as to what Leigh is. I think she's closer to Sean than stated. For some reason I just want to say that Sean fathered Jared with Leigh. The fact that she didn't help the hostages made me suspect the Sean-Leigh alliance that much more. I also don't believe the mother died. I think Sean may have killed her. Did the hostages become vampires as well- there was no mention of their deaths?
Oh wow. I'm sorry for double commenting, but I didn't mean to post that last one. O.o
Anyways, as I've stated before. I really don't think I trust Leigh much anymore. I mean, she's nice and all, and I was all for her, but after this chapter my suspicions have hiked up in the air. That, and I really find myself on Eliza's side in the whole ordeal. I went through a small phase where I thought Eliza was just too headstrong and dumb, but now I really do like her. I like how she put Leigh in her place, because Eliza is right in this. Leigh doesn't need to know anything about what's going on because no one can trust her yet. Only Johnny trusts Leigh, and quite frankly, I find Johnny a shaky leader. Don't get me wrong, he's awesome and all, but if he was so willing to give up his leadership role and so willing to change a girl not many of the guys trust, I think he can be a bit.. airheaded sometimes. So, yes, I have high suspicions on Leigh. Even if she isn't a bad person in the end, Eliza is right. Leigh knows something that she isn't telling anyone. Moving on, I really feel for Jimmy in this story. It's just so damn sad what happened to him in these past few chapters. I'm so happy that Brian was able to talk Jimmy out of killing himself, although I have the feeling that Jimmy will be the living dead from now on anyways. I mean, they both were so in love and so into their relationship and just so damn head over heals for each other. I can't believe she's gone. This chapter made me tear up a bit because of how Jimmy reacted. It's so sad. And I'm on the edge of my seat when it comes to Sean. I am dying to know what's going and happening. I really can't believe he is doing all of this and I truly can't wait to see how it's going to play out with him.
I absolutely adore this story. Like, so much. Although I'm a leafy commenter and don't really comment much, this story really, truly is one of my favorites. I love the world you've managed to create. It's so intense and so vivid in my mind and I can picture it all so well. Your story is like one of those dreams that you have -when you wake up, you find yourself constantly trying to go to sleep again to relive it again. I get lost in the minds of that characters you have. They are so well developed and so very relatable. They truly stick to their colors and aren't bland people like, say... the Twilight vampires or something. I love how they aren't perfect and that they are as human as vampires can be. Not to mention the plotline of your story always has me... and many, many others as you can see... on the end of my seat. I'm constantly checking for an update and I seriously get a little pumped up when I see one. I just love reading about this world that you've made. It truly is super amazing and I can't really display how amazed I am by your talent enough.
Okay, sorry for boring you to tears, but now I'm done with my long rant. Keep up the excellent work and always, always, always write. You have such a major gift and I never want to see you give it up.
I absolutely cannot wait for the update... obviously. ;)