Holy Spit stick! I loved the update, and if you don't update immediatly, I will hunt you down and use everything on the "Ways to Annoy Cinema Bizarre" list on you! And I mean it!
I like this story, and I have subscribed. But could you do one thing? Change the layout, or tweek it? The font is really hard to read, though I love how it looks like Strify's picture is looking at Bill.