Stargazing - Comments

I like your layout. It's really cute and simple and the red color matched the story very well.

The way that you described the scenery was very thoroughly and detailed. But in a good way. I had a picture in my mind that matched the picture in the layout very accurately. I think that was my favorite part: the details you put into each paragraph.

Like savannah kay; said above, I'm not too crazy about these kind of plots. You made it work enough for me to read it and leave you a comment, don't get me wrong. But just the idea that he could have anyone, but instead, he loves her just doesn't make me go crazy for the story, you know?

But other than that, there was nothing that I didn't like about it. Your writing is stellar and your detail is amazing. :3

I quite enjoyed it.

I read this before I commented on the journal, so don't think I skimmed. XD

The only thing I didn't like was how he seemed to be in love with her all of a sudden. Stories where the "omg everyone likez him but he chose ME*~" thing happens turn me off, but it was vague, so I kind of liked it a bit. It made me wonder for Nikolai's feelings about Estelle before he met with her, if he had been secretly pining after her or what. What his story was. So congrats on that. :)

I'm not sure if he tricked her or if she turned into a vampire at the end, and as much as that's bugging me, it's still making me like the story. I like anticlimaxes or "think of the end yourself" stories because even though they frustrate the hell out of me, it makes me realize that they were good enough for me to want to know the ending...if you understand what I'm saying. If it was a bad story I wouldn't care about knowing how it ended. So congrats on that also.

The writing was very nice and so was the imagery/description. I really liked it. :)

Um...
woah.
That was pretty freaking epic, if I do say so, myself.
I'm impressed.
I found no mistakes. The writing was amazing.
Nice job.
I think I'm... gonna go ...
re-read.

This was so....like....damnn. o.o

It was poetic. The way you wrote it was just lovely. I loved how you described the sky and just...everything. And the layout was just the icing on the whole cake.

I loved everything about this.

I stopped admiring the stars when I realized that they never change - I really liked this line.

This was actually pretty interesting.
It kind of reminded me of Jessica's Guide to Dating on the Dark Side.
Exchange student from Romania, he's a vampire, totally gorgeous, that aspect of it.

Anyways, this was pretty interesting and I enjoyed it.
Good work.

Your layout is lovely. (:
And your description is very interesting - I enjoy it a lot.
But, I enjoy your writing. :)

Interesting, but a little confusing in some aspects. For instance, what time of day does it take place? I love your description of scenery, but some things seemed to contradict each other. I'm also a little confused as to what happened at the end. Did she actually die, or did she become a vampire?

Beautiful layout, by the way. ^^

This was great! I love the girl's name.
And vampires murdering (FINALLY!) :D

=) love it Jasper!

ohh I like this!