Four Become One - Comments

Goddamit, I hate you right now. :( This totally made me cry.

This story made me cry so much, but in a good way. This is absolutely beautiful, and it made me feel better in some way.

Perfection.
I really feel like you captured this beautifully and if you decide to write another piece to this I will read but it's perfect as it is right now.
So thank you for writing this.
I will be sure to pass this along to other fans and friends.
Thank you sooo much.

foREVer

This was great.

Thankyou for writing this, your an awesome writer. never before has a story brought me to tears, and yes its taken its god damn time but... its finally hit me, and i've finally accepted it. ty.

i got a little teary eyed. ur such an amazing writer Hannah. love it.

Oh man, this was amazing.
I definitely cried, but it is truly amazing. <3

Thank you

it was a good update, i'm glad you decided to write more. writing very emotional stories must be your thing

i am so glad u wrote more. its definitely been a hard time and u do a great job at helping others get thru it. its beautifully written and always makes me cry lol. love the story. :)

foREVer <3

this is just magnificent.
foREVer

Incredible.
I cried. Again.
I miss him.

If your concert scene almost made me cry, I can't imagine what seeing them live at Uproar is going to do *wobbly smile*. This was very well written and it really capture the emotion of the moment. Well done.

I loved it.

I was so scared when you said you were writing a second part, because the first is so perfect. But I had no need to be, it's absoulutly stunning. The best tribute story to the Rev, I've read. Thank you so much. foREVer. <3

Wow, this part was just as good as the first. Well written, with the same mood and... (I had another word, but forgot, so, forgive me?).
But, anyways, I'll just say 'amazing' and leave it at that.

(But I was hoping you'd have some of/all the lyrics for Fiction. I hate not knowing.)

Damn, I didn't think the first part of this could be matched, but you proved me wrong.
I adored it, woulda been in tears, but it seems I can't be since it's so early still, lol.

foREVer.

Nicley written. It was amazing in every single way. I wish I could write like that!

I can not begin to describe how awesome that was
I'm still fighting with my tears as I'm writing the comment
That was so incredibly beautiful
Jimmy will clearly be missed
I really wonder how the guys will handle being on the road again
I seriously can't wait for the album to come out
The song Fiction will probably be awesome
Big thanks for writin this one

foREVer <3

This is so beautiful,

I know I'm going to be a mess at the concert, and when I hear their CD.