June 19th, 2010 at 06:14am
-drools-
That was hot in a...strange kind of way
I like the graphicness though! It was way cool and different
Everyone likes something different ^.^
I nearly started crying at the beginning because Brian just left
When you can get your reader to cry, you know you're good ;D
But then you went to the sex and I was like WHOA...Oh my this is nice xD
But yeah, I loved this. Good idea, I like it ;D
But when he came back I was like YAY!
And then the graphic bit . . . oh boy.
Lol, I love how you portrayed them.
This was good (:
And yes, when I said Anything Goes, I meant it.