I am going to be completely honest with you right now, because I don't see the point in commenting unless you actually have something helpful to say. First I do enjoy this story, it is dragged out, you should have made the chapters longer and less of them, okay so now that that's out of the way. I'm not having a go at you, I just though of this when I was reading your story (: Which you should be proud of, not many things make me think harder then I have too... Anyway, Abi claimed to love Brian, like so many girls do in all the mibba stories, but when things go wrong they leave right? But isn't love supposed to be unconditional, it's not really love if one of them can cheat and the other person suddenly can't stand to be around them or love them anymore, 'cause if love is unconditional then it wouldn't matter to the other person... I'm not going to rant, anymore, 'cause I'll bore you and myself, just decided to share my views, I do enjoy the story though (: Congrats, it's a rather good plot.. Oh and just thought I'd inform you, this is the longest comment I have ever written.
I love getting on Mibba every other night and seeing an update. It makes me so happy. And I'm really happy with Abi and Brian's relationship. I'm making another comment on how she needs to agree to marry him already!
I love everything about this story. There's seriously not one thing that I'd change about it! Other than Abi just needs to accept the fact that she wants to marry Brian. I'm so excited for that! So, so, so excited for them to finally get married.