It Wasn't Meant To Turn Out Like This - Comments

I just finished the last chapter and for one thing I just want to say job well done! Ha ha. I just read the last three chapters and I think they were very well written. I liked how you described Mayza's feelings as she realized how much more she loved her baby than she already thought. The wedding was really sweet! I LOVED Mayza's wedding dress; it's gorgeous. :) You wrote the wedding sequence quite beautifully and I was really moved by it. Wonderful job and amazing story! I'm honored that I got to read it! :)

Aw, that was a lovely ending to a lovely story :)

wow this was an amazing update and I really adored the dress that Mayza wore :) Absolutly perfect ending to a perfect story!

Great job!

LOVE IT SO MUCH

Aww, they finally have their baby :)
I'm sad that the next chapter will be the last :(

amazing update cant wait to read more =]

Aw the baby :D

Great update and I am sadden but excited for the last update :]

NOOOOOO!!!!! This story is amazing and wonderful! If you say it's childish thenit hurts my feelings and makes me think I'm childish for reading it!

This is such a wonderful story and I can't wait for them to meet their baby girl :]

Great job and I can't wait for more :D

this is really great so far! cant wait for more of this!

Chapter 42: THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!! and I like this story, because it's original!
Update soon<333333333333

I think this story is great. So what its about Fairys you have a great imagination

Hey don't put the story down it is a great story so it has fairys doesn't mean it can't be good

but sometimes childish is good :D, I mean, I'm still a kid at heart, I love your story :D

I love the name! :)
Poor Mayza, it can't be easy for her being so small with a human size baby growing inside her!
Loved it, more when you can please :)

Awe this update was so sweet :]

And the name is a really good one!

Can't wait for more great job :]

Awesome! I can't wait for more so update soon please!

Only 4 chapters left?! Oh no! And then you're taking a break from writing? Why are all my favourite authors disappearing from this site?!?

Anyway, loved the update, can't wait for more :)

haha, lol, mayza made me laugh a lot. more!!!

Can't wait for them to have their baby girl :] So cute!

Great update and I am excited for the next one :]