Beyond This Illusion - Comments

I’m here as the new host for ‘The Band Dude Contest’.

I will admit that you had very strange prompts so I was really interested in what this story was going to be about. And at first, I’ll also admit, I was a bit confused. The way you were writing this and the prose itself was a bit disorientating simply because it was so odd—in a good way, of course. It’s just not the typical ‘point A to point B’ prose, so it took me a little bit to get into it. I also lowkey thought it was going to be a creepy story, like Tyson was going to take what he wanted in bad ways, oops. To discover that this was actually a very poetic love story was amazing and wonderful. I loved how you followed the timeline in between the first scene to the last. You told me their story and when I thought the first scene didn’t have any relation, you tied it all together with the very last one. It was beautiful.

Your writing style is very unique. It’s filled with a subtle purple prose that makes it where the reader might miss something if they don’t read a little deeper. It can be a little vague at times, but you also give enough of a solid core to the readers to create their own imagery around it where you allow it. It’s a very distinctive thing that actually kept me mesmerized when I thought I was going to be confused the entire time and miss the point. I definitely did not.

This was really well-done, I liked it a lot. Great job.

This was beautifully written. You did a great job, and the first person perspective gives it that special touch, makes you really believe it's happening, draws you in and keeps you there for a while.

This was absolutely positively unmistakably amazing...I can't even put into words how great this story was =) You are a wonderful writer!

First off, I have to say I like the layout. It looks awesome. Haha.

I really enjoyed how this was written. The descriptions were perfect; not too short or too long, they were just beautiful. I was going to pick out a few lines I particularly loved but there were just too many. It flowed amazingly, I love how it all progressed and I really enjoyed the ending. This was a total pleasure to read - god damn you're a good writer.

Holy crow, this was amazing. I think I died and went to fanfiction heaven.

You write so beautifully and it was just perfect. I loved every single bit of it.

Great job.

Wow that was grate

I love this.
It was just so beautifully written and made my heart melt