This was actually really good - quite brilliant actually. I loved how you made it so Mike was once a police officer. It made the story believable and how it tells that Paul sold him out and the offer for his badge back. And to be honest, I rather loved the serial killer. This was brilliant, it seemed quite really. And it is amazing. Good job. :)
I know you probably wanted the judge of this contest to comment first, but this... this was brilliant. I loved the serial killer... he was so... COOL! I feel really weird, liking the bad guy, but he seemed so real, almost. Good job ;)
This was actually really good - quite brilliant actually. I loved how you made it so Mike was once a police officer. It made the story believable and how it tells that Paul sold him out and the offer for his badge back. And to be honest, I rather loved the serial killer. This was brilliant, it seemed quite really. And it is amazing. Good job. :)