I just started reading your story, fucking love it by the way. Your author's note at the end of chapter 10; I just watched a video when Ivan did that. I would've crowd surfed like a bat outta hell to shake his hand!
where Ace and Invierno ever together? cuz if they were they sound like a good couple and that would make a good chapter,anyway can't wait for the next chapter
i havent really commented much but i love this story and Im really sad to see it end but I definitely think u should make a sequel. :) its up to u tho. i might read this story over and over again