You have plenty to be proud about this chapter - if nothing else because you brought tears to a cynic's eyes haha. I can't picture the Butcher doing beautiful portraits but I guess that's what love can do to somebody :)
And yay for the sequel! The characters are gonna be off in separate directions for it?
Wow, this story is just. Wow. Okay, I have no words. I mean like, everything overwhelmed me. I can't even explain how I feel. And, as corny as it sounds, there are parts that made me tear up, just a little. Anyway, dude you are great and oh my god I love this.
Are you like a crazy person Butcher? Manipulating people and getting away with it is something only girls can handle!
I really loved this chapter because everyone's little role in their collective lives is so perfectly spelled out - with William and Mike being all music-y and Victoria being all film-y and Lila being all romanticly tangled, and Mel and Michael being all perfect - in other words, that last bus segment. Eeee!
Oh, and I kinda wanted Nosy-Version-of-Lila to watch that video clip :D But that wouldn't be good for the sake of the plot now would it!
whenever i hear the name Melly I think of Melbourne Australia haha. this chapter was a lovely distraction from The Scarlet Letter and so is typing this comment :) i like how Victoria is working on her film project constantly (this chapter it was mostly a pretense but still) - i wanna see her resulting documentary if only it were possible!
aww this story is lovely :) i like a good TAI story. especially since it's got other awesome band folk in it! their drinking game makes me upset - they need to talk about this stuff not just blurt it out (or slur it out, whichever). I really like where it's going.
Sorry it's been so long! I was on holiday. VICTORIA YOU BITCH. BE NICE TO JACK. DON'T BE HORRIBLE. WHICH YOU ARE BEING. sdfkjhdflghdfklkjg. Not impressed vicky-t, not impressed.
Wowwww, I love the Victoria/Jack going on, love it. i need more! Honestly i think Victoria's my favorite in this story. then again the rest of them are in very interesting situations as well (:
BUTCHER AND WHO? LISA? IT MAY SOUND LIKE LILA BUT IT IS NOT. I AM DISGUSTED BUTCHER. DISGUSTED. SEX IS WORTH MORE THAN LILA? FINE. HAVE LISA. I GET LILA.