Iced Coffee and a Chilly Breeze - Comments

It's all dialogue but I'm in love! It's not even bad, I love how I can just see this.

I quite admired the simplicity of this piece, and how it was indeed simple, but not dull.
It was interesting that there was only dialogue, and I think it's kind of cool.
I liked all of the dialogue; you're good at it.
It flowed fairly smoothly, and there were no errors whatsoever. It was amazing.
The ending was perfect, and it was probably my favorite part.
Great job.

I really liked this :) It was simple, but really really good!